Draft Report Take 2

Sian asked me to remove the part "However after educating myself" as she felt the examiner would already know I have educated myself in this matter, therefore this sentence is redundant, I agree. There is a quote at the end of the first paragraph, I was advised to find the reference for this quote and to place it within my work and be included in my bibliography.  

At the end of the second paragraph I was asked to reference where I have found my facts and to reference them, however I was advised if the quotes are from many different readings and the work is mine (which it is) I could reference Myself as (O'Hanlon 2014).

I also needed a date for the Gustav Hartlaub Quote.

Here I questioned if New Objectivity was indeed a unified art movement because of the variety and diversity of the artists, I was asked to expand on this statement. 

Finally I have a quote from Walter Benjamin in reference to Albert Renger-Patsch photographic work "The World is Beautiful" but I had not yet tried up the paintings to photography... I was advised to relate these differences and start work on the  photography section of New Objectivity.

We also looked at perhaps bringing in the likes of Guy Debords situationists and the work of 1980's Deadpan.